Kivlov wrote:
Stryder237 wrote:
Another thing is use of better English across the site, to appear more professional.
The thing at the top is a good example "Many new features, including DirectX11 support and Left Hand side driving!" is better. There's nothing grammatically wrong with the original; it just looks really bad.
Excuse me, but I don't understand. You've just said there's nothing grammatically wrong with it, but why does it look bad then?
I kind of agree with Stryder237. The overuse of exclamation marks does make it seem a bit (No offence intended) childish. If you reduce the number of exclamation marks; "Many new features!!!"; from 3 to 1, it would sound a bit more professional. The same goes for the "BUY IT NOW!!!". Again, reducing the number from 3 to 1 would make it sound more professional.