citycardriving.com/history
Near the last line:
ORIGINAL: At present "City Car Driving" driving simulator is continuing its developing.
CORRECTION: At present "City Car Driving"
driving simulator is continuing its
development.
People already know that CCD is a driving simulator, so no need to keep saying it like:
"The "City Car Driving" car simulator..."
"The car driving simulator 'City Car Driving'..."
Maybe you can say it like that in the FAQ or in the commonly visited areas of the site, but not everywhere in the site
.
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Another one (not so sure about this though):
citycardriving.com/faq?view=faq&catid=16
I have an error or any other serious problem. Actions described above haven't helped me. What should I do now?
ORIGINAL: Note: If you do not see a button that allows you to save the output, you will need to log on to the Windows as the Administrator.
CORRECTION: Note: If you do not see a button that allows you to save the output, you will need to log on to
the Windows as the Administrator.
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citycardriving.com/faq?view=faq&catid=10
ORIGINAL: The car simulator "City Car Driving" is not a free game. If you wish to use it, you should buy a serial number for it. You can buy the one here -
citycardriving.com/buy/citycardriving
CORRECTION: The car simulator "City Car Driving" is not a free game. If you wish to use it, you should buy a serial number for it. You can buy
the one here -
citycardriving.com/buy/citycardriving
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Not so sure about this ↓↓:
citycardriving.com/buy/citycardriving
ORIGINAL: 1. Your license is valid for the only one particular computer.
CORRECTION: 1. Your license is valid for
the only one
particular computer.
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citycardriving.com/buy/citycardriving
I learned about this common mistake in school
ORIGINAL: 4. The Home Edition of our car simulator presented on our website cannot be used for commercial purposes.
CORRECTION: 4. The Home Edition of our car simulator presented on our website
may not be used for commercial purposes.
"Can" or "cannot" expresses possibility, while "may" or "may not" expresses permission. In this case, it is possible to use the Home Edition for commercial purposes, if one breaks the license rules, but it's not allowed.
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citycardriving.com/buy/citycardriving
Minor typo (I think you know what it's supposed to be):
- If you
wush to use our simulator for commercial purposes, please read about the commercial license - here.